Comments needed please

[shrek]

Im almost finished with my site, I would like to get some comments or suggestions..Thank you

http://www.parlettdesigns.com/uturn.htm

Todd

[pinkaboo]

Woah!!! That's a totally different feel from the last one of yours I saw (the monochrome one with the silhouette) That's scary, makes me think totally differently about you, the last one was slick but lacking in warmth, impersonal, this one seems much more personable and approachable.

I do have a niggle though - if you are feeling picky the hand graphics could do with the edges being tidied up. That muddy ochre outline they have in places looks a bit odd, and some of the edges seem tatty - especially the ones in the portfolio section.
Hmm, I wonder if it's because the colour of the edges is not going too well with the orange bg? Maybe a touch of photoshopping to get a more complimentary shade of shadow would do the trick?

Ooooo, again, another picky niggle, but maybe the intro text on your home page could do with being placed in your graphic box more elegantly. A bit of space between the border and the text would help, and then if you could get it so that the text is a central block of type so that there is less space below the words that would have more impact I think. I guess what I am trying to see is you have done a nice box for the text to sit in, yet it just looks a bit "plonked" on at the moment!

Other than that, it loaded in really fast for me, and all seems well :) (I am presuming that the experiments section is uncompleted and therefore not a link on purpose)

*shrug*
:)

K

[shrek]

Thanks Pinkaboo,
I was going with a little different feel for this one. I took all the comments I got from yall seriously and totally changed the site.
Thanks for the help.

[sfa]

Yeah, it is much nicer than the previous one - good job.

SFA

[vilehelm]

i don't think you need "navigation" on your navigation bar...

funny palm pic