updated site...

[eviltwin]

i put this up for opinion a few months ago but didn't get much reply.........
i've since changed the look and feel of the site........
it's not got all the content in there, but some words of advice would be great,
thanks
the EviLTwiN

http://www.herreviltwin.co.uk/rocksoc.htm

[snapple]

It's a nice site, just a few (very picky) things :

Your 'line MC' (on the left) that reveals the contact info has a nasty little habit of moving to the left after the main animation has finished, you'll see what i mean if you look carefully.

Also, the lines that follow the mask to reveal the information would look better if it faded before it hit the end line (on the right, that marks the boundry of the rectangle) - it would look a lot more smooth.

This is just personal preference, but i think that you either need to make the title bigger or change the font, to make it stand out from the buttons more.

I would also make the actual text that is revealed stand out a bit more (a bit like your headings), but i know the effect your trying to ahieve and it can be hard.

These are very picky things and you can ignore them if you want, just thought i'd let you know.

Over all, i like the site, it is very impressive. It has animation when loading, but not so much that it looks unecessary or over the top, usability is good and the flash is smooth.

Snapple :)

[Tink]

all works fine

i see the line move after contact but i think it's just moving to it's final position. all the lines that move have inertia added to em.

i think the graphical element of the site could do with some work. theres nothing that stands out and attracts attention. it doesn't necessarily need colour but it looks kinda bland i think?

i know u aint site checking this site but i check out eviltwin.co.uk (i think its that). the site on there is the same but i think it looks a lot better. (also the plugin check didn't work, said it may be a slow connection but i'm at work on a T1? just thought i'd mention it)

cheers

BLEEDs

[eviltwin]

thanks a lot,
will make changes..........
:)

[mad_A]

nice site.

On your own sitw (herreviltwin) there is an error with your plugin detecter - it takes the 6 player as not having the 5 player and you can't get in from there.

With the other one you might want to slow down the scroller on the text fields - it is a bit too fast for good usablility.

still nice.