please, take a look... http://netbornmusic.com

[netborn]

Very interested in your opinions about my site:
netbornmusic.com (http://netbornmusic.com)
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Thanks !!!

[snapple]

netborn,

Wooaa, those colors there (i needed sunglasses) - but everyone has there own styles. The text on your intro and when buttons were clicked (in the top right hand corner and the far left hand side) was cut off by the boundry of your sqaure background MC.

Also it was a little hard to see what was going on at times, when buttons were clicked and the background was moving, it all got a little confusing. Combined with those colors, i thought i was having some sort of attack (only kidding).

Obviously you want the site like that, but just bear in mind that some times you can achieve the same effect without going over the top.

You also might want to consider separate pe-loaders for each button / new section, a lot of flash developers are of the opinion that flash is a 'streaming' medium and that people should only wait for what they want to see. For me the waiting times were annoyingly slow.

You also might want to create larger hit areas for the main buttons, the user automatically goes for the text that describes the section, not the pic !

Obviously your good with flash, everything is there, you have used a lot of techniques - i just can't help but feel that you've let it down by :

1) The slightly 'mad' and unorgansied natrue fo the site.

2) Poor usability, hard to read text.

These are picky things, i honestly can see that the site has taken a lot of work, and that you obviosly wanted it to look a certain way, but remember that poeple do actually have to USE the site efficantly.

As for sound...well i am stuck in one of the 24 hour computer rooms at college at the momment (well i say stuck, i just did not have any money to go out with my friends) - the puter's in here do not have speakers, so you'll have to get someone else to comment on that.

Over all, nice site, good work. You can (as with most advice) totally ignore all that i have said, they are picky things - but any improvement is good !

Hope this helped, Snapple :)

[sfa]

That is very original and different to most sites i've seen. It is true that it is brighter than i would choose but the colours match together. Try making the animations smoother.


SFA

[netborn]

Some changes at the site:

http://netbornmusic.com

Please, take a look and tell me what you think... Thanks!