site check (mysecond one)

[killer119]

hi guys,
I had posted in here for a site check but it had a problem....
its on a new server now its:
www.ld.web1000.com

please bear with me if it takes a little long to load ......I couldn't include the 'skip intro' option .........this is one of those in which the intro is required

& check out my experiments .......my friends told me they were
cool :p

& thanx Billy T & Pinkaboo for your concern
& hey you don't mnid askin' ........how do you include an avatar in here & how do you put a flash object in place of the signature?

[snapple]

killer119,

Actually laoding times for me were good, around 5 seconds, so no worries there.

Now, i can appreciate that the intro is good, and it quite clearly has taken some hard work, however for me....it's just been done too many times. Images flying around like they're lost and random words / sentences zooming in and out / back and forth.

Yes, it looks good...but origionality is 98% of what makes good web design.

I also felt like there could have been a little more on the main page, all there was, was the navigation - its nice to keep things simple, but to an extent. Again, that navigation has been done too many times to count, the rounded squares with the images in.
I am not sure if you wanted it so, but the 'over' state of the buttons looked a little misplaced and jerky ????

However, the line drawing, made for good continuety throughout the site...nice.

Now, this is just for slightly retarded people (like my self, either that or sleep deprivation) but i kinda needed some instruction, regarding the drag 'n' drop feature in the experiments section.

Images could do with some work on as well, but i know thats there is alwasy trouble with importing images in flash etc.

Over all, nice idea, good continuety, just needs a bit of brush up, mainly quality of buttons (the way they look and the over states)
and a bit more excitment in there, and an intro that you have thoguht of all by your self.

Hope this helped, i would like to check back to see it with a few repairs made.

Sorry, i have not got time to check all the site and all the experiments, sorry again.


Hope this helped in some way,

Snapple :)

[Fade]

Killer,

To take a very positive view, I'd have to go with Snapple.

4 pieces of advice:
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Take out the pre-loader. (thier evil) ;)
Tone down, and slow down, the intro. There are to many things flashing across the screen to fast to make any kind of statement about your company.
As Snapple mentioned: Improve the buttons.
And finaly, also as Snapple mentioned, liven up the main screen. Perhaps you should put a welcome message with a little about what your company does and why you are better than your competors. Vistors will not spend any (hardly) effort to find out what a website is about; they'll just leave.
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Overal looking just fine. I look forward to seeing your next revision of this site!

HTH :D,
--FADE

[killer119]

snapple fade thanx guys,
about the intro being fast ..er ....U had to synchronize it with the music....well Its fast alright.....
about the preloaders.....how do you know if the flash stuff is loading or not?
about the main page ....well actually I could.nt come up with an idea to put anything relevent.....mine is not a company.....well i'm just another flash crazy maniac....a background picture which can be changed would be fine right?
about the buttons well...........Iv'e got nothin' to say.....
overall what doo you think of the orignality of the site :D

thanx guys ...& hey plzz tell me how to put an avatar here ....& place a flash object in place of the signature. :p

[snapple]

killer119,

I was in one of the 24 hour puter rooms that have sh.it puter's i.e. no speakers, so could not hear sound, sorry.

You might want to center your laoding text at the begining.

Bg, image would be fine, but can really add to file size, unless you optimize your graphics.

Origionality of the site ?....not very - (refer to my previous post).

Avatar /s signitures / flash objects / status...blaa, blaa - fade was asking the same question in the 'general-chat' forum, think BLEEDA answerd it.


Snapple :)

[killer119]

thanx,
....I'll be putting more stuff in the experiments section, i've made a few intros which iv'e to include......
I'll center the preloader.
thanx for the tips ;)