First attempt

[999dom999]

Ok don't think this is the calibre of all the sites I have seen on here. This is my first attempt at a website, I'm not a designer or particularly creative and was asked to knock up a simple looking site for my company.

All critisism very welcome, I hope to continue to work on this and make as slick as I can

Thanks

http://www.zeonltd.co.uk/new/

[Cabezon]

999dom999:
First excuse me for my English. I have a couple of design suggestions. First you should place the menu about 4 or 5 pixels above it's current position (to match the imaginary line of the top of the photograph in the main section). Second the texts above the photos is moving too fast. slow it down. And last but not least.. in the about section, maybe yo need to change the navigating arrows so they match the rest of the page.
Well that's it... anyway it is a good page. need some polishing but GREAT JOB
Cabezon

[999dom999]

Thanks for your comments. I had made the about buttons blue to stand out but you are right they are not the right colour. I have made them grey and added a glow to make them stand out more.

I know what you mean about making the menu higher, I did do this before but It looked wrong so I made the menu in line with the top of the 'N' in 'Zeon'.

I made the text that fast because it was so jerky when slower. I think I may just redo the text completely I did this right at the start before I started playing with actionscript.

I have made it live now on http://www.zeonltd.co.uk will use /new/ for testing.

Thanks

Dom