My first site, mine!

[Jose Antonio]

Hey Folks,

It's been up for some time now, I've changed a few things here and there but nothing really significant, it's plain and simple but that's me; although I'm sure it could use some work.

Anyway, I would really like some constructive criticism from you guys, or whatever you can offer; please.

http://www.joseantonio.biz


Peace
Jose Antonio

[Paul Ferrie]

For you first attempt can say anything bad about it:)

Only a couple of things i feel i should comment on.

1. The text in the home page scrolled area.
This text is blurry and there are methods to make it more legible, crisp, clean, sharp.
i have a thread here (http://www.scotflash.co.uk/forum/viewtopic.php?t=4) that outlines some tips.

2. Your contact information(NY,LA).
You should display the contact email address as well as have a button to launch user email client. You cant guarantee that ever user will be using 'outlook' and the like.
You could go the extra mile and sue a simple flash email form. I have a sample file here (http://www.scotflash.co.uk/forum/viewtopic.php?t=43).

Hope the info helps

[Jose Antonio]

Paul,

Thank you for taking the time and checking it out, for your advice and links; they are truly appreciated.


Peace
Jose Antonio