OK I've approved both. Thanks very much :)
Some things to watch out for: the first two pages had MS Word code in them, which makes the text look wierd on our site. If writing in Word, and copying / pasting, there's a feature in the CMS editor where you can right click and go "Paste from Word". It'll automatically reformat it nicely.
Also a few of your code blocks had paragraph breaks in them. If you do a live preview you will see this causes the text "<p>" to show up in the code itself. The best bet with code is to copy and paste it into a plain text editor like notepad, then paste it into the CMS. That ensures it doesn't have any fancy line breaks in it.
Thanks again!