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cobra302
10-13-2002, 09:24 PM
Okay.. just started on it.. Im not going to buy a .com till I get good at web design, but so far i have the intro page. www.graphixsoft.netfirms.com/index.swf .. I need to fix some stuff which i will but what do you all think for a n00b?
I followed the link.. but it seems that no movie is present on that page (or you've moved the movie). Either way i have problems viewing your work. Not a good start for you fellow newbie ;)
cobra302
10-13-2002, 11:56 PM
Errr try this
newlink (http://www.graphixsoft.netfirms.com/index.html)
I am trying to click on "Enter" but nothing is happening.
SFA
cobra302
10-16-2002, 03:02 AM
yea lol like i said.. i have the beg page only.. im already changing it.. i already learned about 20 new things.. it helps when u already know languages.. and i got someone that can do graphix for me
tost_cy
10-19-2002, 03:25 PM
hi,
i got to see it right away over here - no prob
for a first site, you shouldn't be ashamed!
good things:
- animations move smoothly
- navigation is obvious and clear
constructive remarks:
(i don't say "bad things"!):D
- i don't like this font animation with your name
it's so ordinary - just my opinion
( and it screws your alignment, bit slumpy)
- try using another font?
i've had it with hattenschweiler/impakt
designers shouldn't use standard fonts automatically, there's so much type beauty out there - find it
try to keep your font use consistent,
using italic and normal headers in different sizes makes it look a bit slumpy, i'm shure if you would use the same font style everywhere, the overall appearence would be much cleaner
(does your name really needs to be this big?
succes
tosta
boyzdynasty
10-20-2002, 01:33 PM
i thought it was pretty cool....but I didn't really like the color of the site.
yea...the font thing.... change 'em
enough bashin'.....I do like the site.
nice job!!
I, too, am a newbie....but your work doesn't look like a newbies
:(
*makin' me look bad*
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