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BirdOnWire
11-01-2002, 11:27 AM
a new flash intro by me , don't click the links are not done yet but criticism is welcome as usual , c ya

http://www.algeel.com/badro/ch.htm
jimburton
11-01-2002, 02:18 PM
don't take this the wrong way but that kind of 'skip intro' intro is just right out as far as I can tell - people hate them and they get fed up with checking their watch to see if it really is still 2000 :) I would get straight into the business if I were you...

. maybe fade the menu items out as well as in

. fade the top menu items in and out so they match the round menu

. the circle thing round the menu with a scrolly bit on the end of it looks weak

. does the colour scheme come frmo the client? If not, lighten it up...

Hope this sounds constructive, cos that's what it's meant as...

cheers,
d.arkins
11-01-2002, 02:23 PM
I think the text is jumping around a little too in-elegantly...
I think it is a little fast too? Perhaps coz you have seen it run through 500 times you might not realise that its quite fast.
I think that the black is a little harsh and that overall it needs softening... I don't know if I'm explaining what I mean very well...

It sems to function okay though and loads pretty quick. I would like to see a loader image that is a bit more interesting than just the text "loading" with a status bar. Nothing too crazy, just a little interesting, so the viewer is doesn't lose too much patience.

good luck with it
I will post a design I'm working on soon and you can feel free to be honest right back at me!
BirdOnWire
11-01-2002, 05:03 PM
Originally posted by d.arkins
I think the text is jumping around a little too in-elegantly...
I think it is a little fast too? Perhaps coz you have seen it run through 500 times you might not realise that its quite fast.
I think that the black is a little harsh and that overall it needs softening... I don't know if I'm explaining what I mean very well...

It sems to function okay though and loads pretty quick. I would like to see a loader image that is a bit more interesting than just the text "loading" with a status bar. Nothing too crazy, just a little interesting, so the viewer is doesn't lose too much patience.

good luck with it
I will post a design I'm working on soon and you can feel free to be honest right back at me!

thnx d.arkins I will really do something with the loading bar , I don't know but it will be the main page of the site not a flash intro so I wanted it to that fast,
waiting to c ur work !