Need a thorough critique...

[annexion]

Annexion SG (http://www.annexionsg.com)

Lay it on me, my feelings won't be hurt, I might cry and snivel and pout, but I always have everyone's shoulder here to cry on...:p

[Sonic_Mush]

good site, spent most of my time blowng up words, but that just me, the links"Here" in the Learn section dont work, and when u say "products" do mean projects? because it looks like you dont actualy make anything atm, but if you mean porjects, then its a quite a diffrent thing. i might have got the wrong of the stick,

good site thou, not to fancy not to plain.

[annexion]

Well, at some point we plan to offer products... Such as template based presentations on CD or things of that nature...The links don't work as I have not put anything there yet, you know how slow going site building can be.

There's a lot of organization of data that I need to do, but other than that...Well, WYSIWYG.

Anything you don't like about the color scheme?
Any other suggestions?

[tost]

what colour scheme are u talking about?
everything is black :)

good:
clear, clean, simple, staightforward.
not flashin' all over, you just used one cool effect and let it work.
like that.
just the placing of the buttons is a bit strange, when nothing happens they're a bit hangin' loose in the middle of the page

less ;) :
are you also a design agency? if yes, that's a problem to me
there is no feel, atmosphere in the design
this would be no or less of a problem if there were some projects exposed, a portfolio or something
as a client, i have no idea what you guys would make for me
how it would look like

if you offer only purely technical services, forget what i said.

cheerz
tosta

[annexion]

Well, a lot of things are tentative as of yet. We aren't sure what we are going to do. Essentially we started out as helping bands, setting up venues and such. I've just been wanting to do something with Flash for quite a while. Who knows, this attempt may not work, but I can try again. C'est La Vie.

Now, the color scheme...

See, I thought that black and white might look best, but I've yet to try anything else... Perhaps you could lend a couple hints.

[hud]

Your content font is the same as the navigation font. I would change the color or style of text navigation. They serve different purposes but look the same. When more content is added to the site it might be confusing to the viewer.

[dallas]

To be honest....

I was bored

colour
imagery
sound
animations
theme

place all these togeather and you will get what flash is all about...


Dallas....

take the step and then learn how to run... but don't just run, fly

[vilehelm]

This is isn't really a flash critique or a design critique for that matter. I would get input from your marketing chap because the site is not gonna do a whole lot for the business itself. You need case studies. You need to prove what you can do is worth doing.

Design wise I think it looks a little hasty. I don't see any great realationship between the Logo, the menu, the content and the bounding box. Seems like 4 really distinct elements that want nothing to do with one another. You need something to pull them togther...also the scale of each element is whacky. Why so much space for menu? You have just about the same for content?

[annexion]

Vile, thanks...

It is all experimental as of right now...No decisions have been made at all, this is just me screwing around.

But I will take all of your reviews into consideration.

Thanks.