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ASWC
07-13-2009, 03:43 PM
the second part of the slide show complete guide is ready. I tried to add the as tags and I hope I did it correctly. I also modified a bit the first article only to add the relationship with this new one.

Jesse
07-14-2009, 12:56 AM
Looks really good and the tags are working.

Suggestions include:
- I think you've tried to use the "quote" tags, which only work on the forums, not in the CMS
- You may want to split the content into multiple "pages" so it's easier to read. I'd suggest making the content from the "How do I time this" header onwards a sepearate page. (Note you can create multiple pages within the one article).

Approved both.

Jesse
07-14-2009, 01:01 AM
One more bit of feedback, it seems some of the comments in your code we wrapped over several lines, which kinda screwed up the formatting. I fixed it up. It probably comes from you using characters / word-wrapping in your code editor.

ASWC
07-14-2009, 03:10 AM
thx a lot, I'll try to split the next ones into a few pages.

ASWC
07-14-2009, 03:51 PM
I reworked the first article to split it into a few pages and to add the as tags. It needs another approval. Can you check if everything was done correctly? I'll do the second article as well later.

Jesse
07-14-2009, 11:21 PM
Good work Jean. The multiple-pages and the highlighted ActionScript look great :)

ASWC
07-15-2009, 03:53 PM
all right I did the second article too, hope I did not miss anything.

Jesse
07-16-2009, 12:59 AM
Great job! There was a small issue on page 2 where you had each line of a code block having it's own opening and close AS tags, so I just made it one block. Other than that, looks perfect

ASWC
08-01-2009, 04:13 PM
I added a new article and also made some corrections on the preceding ones (formatting issues). Please approve and thanks!

Jesse
08-02-2009, 01:47 AM
All approved. Nice work :)