Should I continue?

[styxcb]

Hello all,

This is my first time designing a flash site as I am still learning the program and I would like some constructive criticism. It isn't complex in code or functionality like the other sites posted here and I am not married to any part of the site so please tell me if I am moving in the right direction.


http://members.rogers.com/styxcb

Much appreciated!

[subquark]

Not bad for a start. Maybe draw up your own buttons and continue delving into flash. Not bad for your first flash site. Just keep visiting this forum and looking at other people's work to get an idea of what can be done (then, like me, become horribly discouraged 'cause you can't figure out how they did it!).

Best of luck!

[bluegel]

Originally posted by subquark
Maybe draw up your own buttons


I think that if you can do your own buttons then it always looks better, but that's a minor thing

I personally didn't like the moving sky in the background, it made me dizzy. I wasn't too keen on the grey border either.

But other than that, I liked it :)

[holtzy]

Not bad at all, but the sky or at least the color of the moving sky has to go/change.