ste check this baby.

[bahrami]

Hi you'll !
I made this flashsite for my best friend and now I would like some feedback on it.
This I must say that the content is his and it's written in swedish but I'm standing for the design and that is what I would like too hear oppinions on
PEACE


http://www.bahramipro.com/amin/index.html

[arbel]

Very cool...Love those text effects, dying to know how you did them, if you have a tutorial or site that can help me i'd really appreciate. But overall Very Very nice.
Another question: how did you do the preloader with the % ?

Thanks

Idan Arbel

[Strok]

Originally posted by arbel

Another question: how did you do the preloader with the % ?

Thanks

Idan Arbel [/B]

check this out


http://www.actionscripts.org/tutorials/intermediate/flash5_preloaders/index.shtml

[arbel]

Thanks. You know of a quick way to update a flash 4 file to flash 5?

[bahrami]

you just open your Flash4 .fla in flash5

[//kielabokkie]

Looks good, I especially like the moving line when you roll over it with the cursor :D

THe only thing I would do is change the hit state of the "no sound" button. I would make it so that it also covered the icon cause I was clicking that to stop the sound :)

But besides that it's not bad at all, keep up the good work!

[Zarathusta]

Simple but nice. I like the little touches to the page. eg. the forming heart, and the fracturing line.

Too bad its in swedish though, i would have like to have a read of your poetry.

[Jesse]

I liked 'never forget' the poem. I would try and make it so the scrollable poem list didn't act wierdly when I clicked left while it was already at the far left. the music was good and layout is nice. a few colors would be nice too. well done!