my portfolio sight needs your constructive/destructive crit.

[cg_flipper]

this is my first flash sight -- second sight total --

well i would like to know where i stand.

plz respond -- good or bad -- i have thick skin.

http://www.franklinlyons.com

[superpuppets]

increase the quallity/compression of the images, its worth the file size. ( dont use gif's) use png files, there alot biger in most cases, but its worth it. thats my number one tip to anyone doing flash work.

- make the middle green desplay less saturated ( more gray)

[009]

Personally it's a mess:) It's everywhere.

I don't know why there is background animation when you roll over it. I don't think it serves its purpose. It makes no sense at all. If it's for eyecatching..It's pointless.

Put your loading bar within that "monitor". Make your rewind, forward and close button more professional.

If you follow my advice, your website would be nice, very clean and unobtrusive.