Flash Intro & Site (please post feedback)

[electronic e-den]

Hello everyone,

could you please visit my new site (the 1st I have fully done in Flash) and post some feedback

http://www21.brinkster.com/mossrocket/homeflash.html

Thanks very much,

Peter

p.s. I just saw gabocorp for the first time - I think what I did with the intro may be a little too much like gabo's... Do you think I should change it??? (I don't want to look like those bad designers who have to cheat to look good!)

[Liquid]

I think what you had done looks exactly like http://www.gabocorp.com; so I think you already know the answer to that question.
As for the main .swf--
you need a button to toggle the sound on/off
the main 'page' is barren.
the nav and top logo look visually dislocated for the rest.
philosophy section:
if you decide to animate the content, have it remain instead of stopping on a blank background.

Hope this helps.
Best of Luck

[electronic e-den]

Thanks for the feedback Liquid...

I was pretty happy with my intro until I saw gabo's site
(which seems to do a better job of it!)

music on/off button - good idea
(so it got annoying after a while did it?)

top/bottom dislocated from page...
you've got a point - I suppose I need to integrate the middle section with the nav a bit more...

philosophy - yep - I'll put a play again button on it I think...

thanks again,

peter