New web site

[ojo]

Hi, it's the first time that I write in the forum. I want to show you the last web site that I've made, I hope you like.

http://www.carmencamara.com

Greetings.

[webguy]

It's ok.. The intro is a bit long and drawn out, and the lady animation is good but you could clean up the edges a bit. The gun was a bit hard to get to pull and didn't seem like it needed to be there. After looking at the website and clicking every link at the bottom and reading all the info in the page.. I still have no idea who/what the website is for. I guess it is about the woman I see walking all over the place.. I'm not going to download the other links (1 - 12mb) because they are too large.. and I would only download them if I had to.

I would, shorten the intro. And make the purpose more odvious.

webG

[Colin Campbell]

Welcome to the forums ojo,

I don't like the use of vector in the intro, and then bitmap for the gun... that could use improvement.

BTW: obvious webguy, obvious. hehe

Colin.

[webguy]

who's odvious? Am I really that transparent?

[Colin Campbell]

its spelt with a "b" I'm quite sure...

[webguy]

oblivious is also spelled with a 'b'.. :rolleyes: I think have misspelled that word my entire life..hehe.

[Colin Campbell]

lmao, you know whats funny, I used to avoid posting "obvious" because I always thought I spelt it wrong. Then I checked the dictionary, handy little thing eh? hehe

[Motion2082]

Hey OJO

Welcome, I did not like to intro to your website either. You can keep the woman walking passed the narrow opening but remove her walking & sitting down on the language selection. Its un required animation which just slows down the pre-loading process. I know you worked hard on making that animation come to life but use it to show off your work where to user can choose whether he or she would like to download it.

I also had problems with the gun animation. What is the obsession? Without being too rude if you want to keep the gun keep it. Dont have it spinning in 360 Rotation because people dont have the time to wait for it to rotate before they can navigate to the next section. Personally I could only handle it for 10 secs before i was out of there.

besides that you have put in a good effort but needs work/major modifications, but thats just my opinion and that is what this forum is for

best regards, ;)

[webguy]

yeah, colin. I have dictionary.com as a quick key in Safari.. apple+9 Very useful