my site

[shindavid]

hi.

pls check out my site and let me know wat u think. any constructive criticism, bugs, blah blah, etc, welcome.

http://home.swiftdsl.com.au/~intime/HTML/uniq.html

thank u so much!!

[Colin Campbell]

Ahoy hoy,

Hmmmm, I don't like the opening page. Just the link? I think you should put a splash page up, introducing who you are/what the sites about. Also, the site doesn't seem to have the best navigation. It could use some movement, a little excitement you know? What else, the color scheme is pretty bland. Red and white, with a bit of black. Introduce some other colors in there.

Its a good base no doubt. Good job.

Colin

[shindavid]

thanks for the feedback.

i have yet to design the main page, thought i just put the 'enter' button there as of now.

its my first flash site, learned it straight from the book. forgive the lack of excitement :) there's definitely more to improve, but i think it is the time to get feedback at this stage. dont wanna be working my butt off to something 'unworthy', know wat i'm saying.

thanks a lot!!

[xxyurirfxx]

nice navegation but you still have to improve your design skills

[Colin Campbell]

Originally posted by xxyurirfxx
nice navegation but you still have to improve your design skills

Ahoy hoy,

Maybe some tips on how he could improve his design. We try and be as descriptive as possible here. :)

Colin