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sotabound
12-16-2004, 05:19 PM
I am by far NOT an action script guru, or even a Flash developer, I just use flash to display my work. Let me know what you think! I think I need to work on my preloader.

http://www.artbyscott.com/portfolio.htm

whozie
12-22-2004, 06:41 AM
If you ever want to or need to increase the size of the movie (width & height) I think you could afford to bump it up about 10-15%. But its not needed.

Didnt' see a preloading message, but it loaded fast so I may be missing it anyhow.

The white 1 pixel lines are a bit overbearing, I would remove one of the bordering lines and possible make the remaining one thicker since the 1 pixel rounded corners are always gritty in flash.

I would prefer the blue boxs to be an onPress function rather than an onRollOver....I always rollOver the one I want and accidently rollOver one I dont want when transversing the mouse to another area of the movie.....maybe its just me and granpa's cough medicine.

Overall its a good start! I like the font, flow of the navigation, and content animations...I just think the "look" needs some work.

ohno6345
01-09-2005, 02:09 AM
I like your site. Overall, it could be a little larger making it easier to see and more detail will show through. Not sure what you could do, but when I click on your resume, it is a slow load, and I wasn't expecting it as a pdf; figured it would just be in flash. Wonder if you could have a flash summary of your resume then next to a link offering the pdf form. Pretty good though, I like the layout, and colors.

Neil