Children shoe brand

[qrosity]

Hello!
I was trying to find a balance between children approach to a site and adult one. Take a look at it and be honest.

the site (http://www.tritexcorporationsl.com)

[snapple]

Nothing happened. First of all i could not get into the site (you shold make is more obvious that you have to chose a langauge to enter the site - the menu is not populated and you use very very small text).

Regards, snapple

[qrosity]

Well, I can turn my Video Card to 1280X1024, but then I wont be a standard internet user, with my resolution of 1024X768 fonts do not seem to be small for me. But I will wait till more users give me the same feed back, thanks anyway. :)

[qrosity]

By the way, I have changed the link to go directly to the site.
About the menus, the content is given to me by the company.

"The one that pay the pippers, call the tune"

[Morg]

Hi

In the interactive area the text reads: Do you like winning a price?

This is not correct English. It should read: Do you like winning prizes?
Prize, not price.

Also, Im sure I selected the English version of the site... Lots of non-english text everywhere... strange/confusing.

Just a thought.
PS, I liked the video stuff in the beginning - very nice! The pink background screams a bit though...

[snapple]

Site does not work in Netscape - i think thats a more pressing issue.

[qrosity]

I will check this issue in Netscape, with Mozilla is working fine.
About the english mistake, I have solved this one you are pointing me to.
I'm from Spain

:-(

[scousehouse]

gillipolla guiris :P

[qrosity]

Liamdevereux? French??
You have to say "Gilipollas" nor "gillipollas" and "guiris" is also missused.
I hope my English is better than your Spanish.

What's your mental age?

[scousehouse]

I was sticking up for you! I thought the site was good and any faults in English were overshadowed by the quality of the site. No offence intended :)

[qrosity]

No worries!
:)

[Billy T]

doesnt work on mac (safari)

[ohno6345]

Hi,

The English movie clip never loaded for me. I don't speak Spanish, so I don't understand the site too much. Some cool flash stuff there, but I'm not sure if the content is what you want.

I don't know if the balance between children and adults is good. You don't see young girls on most websites so you may run into trouble there especially with the video camera, but perhaps in Spain this is more acceptable. Also the music is pretty adult sounding. Who is the target audience for the shoes? If its the age group of the girl shown, then you should make the music lighter or less intense for younger audiences. I would think the music is geared towards older teens or college students, but the cartoon is not.

As far as flash, I couldn't find a back button from the links to bring back to the main page. I would have to go back to the intro if I hit back on the browser.

Neil