Site check (my first one)

[beslam]

Hello,
I've made a site for a belgian graphology school and I wanted to know if someone could check it to verify if everything works. It's my first site in flash . Could you give me your opinion, plz?
Thanx.

[xxlm]

Hmmm... with the link it will beb better... : ):)

[snapple]

I don't know how that mistake is made so often? I mean, really, it's done on 40% of site check posts - people forget links.

Absolutely nothing personal, and not meant in anyway whatsoever aggressively - just a curious observation.

I wonder why it is done so often?

Best regards, snapple :)

[xxlm]

I think it's done cause they are posting on lots of forum...
And then when it's the 30000000000 msg you're writting (cause u dunno CTRL+C / CTRL+V) you're forgetting the link.

Or just because you know it and forget that other don't...

Or you're just to much "in the moon" and forget to put it
"In the moon" is a french expression (dans la lune) meaning you're don't take care of things around you cause you're dreaming everytime... :)
(What I am a bit lol)

so we are still waiting the link :)

[Vman]

Personally, I think people are just always in a hurry. I do that all the time at work when I'm sending files. A lot of times I forget to attach them to the email because I'm always rushing. Usually I realize it a split second after I hit the send button though.

I used to do it at the toll booths too. If I'd go through the manual lanes and give 'em a $5.00 bill for a like a $0.50 toll. I'd end up driving away being out $4.00. How?
If you ever notice, they give you change back in two steps. They'll hand you the coin change first, then the bills instead of handing it to you all at once. So as soon as the coin change hit my hand, my brain would tell me ok, I've got my change, let's go, and my foot would be on the gas. What am I gonna do, turn around? Let me tell you, it got expensive! I think I own my own off ramp! :D Personally, I think it's a conspiracy. :mad: Now I have an I-pass. :D

[beslam]

Sorry, the site adress was and is www.harrycadoch.be .
All my apologizes.
Thanx to check it,plz.
^-^
Harry.

[snapple]

Nice use of sound effects on that site. I'm not too keen on the colours though.

One major issue for me was the navigation, not the actual layout of it, but the fact that 50% of the buttons were dead. 7 times i could not get back to the homepage, as well has new pages - seeming randomly - opening up in new windows whilst others didn't. I really would get that bit sorted because you just end up closing the browser down and getting annoyed.

The contact form was comprehensive though, which was good. Although the animation was good on the buttons (the square brackets moving outwards) - i found it hard to use because there was no indication of what area was there unless you rolled over it, so you forget where you have been without rolling over all the buttons again.

I like the easing on the transitions, but you might want to speed things up a little - to make it feel less like a power point presentation.

Over all though, nice work, i like the sound f/x, most things work (i.e. pre loader and scroller) - just a few bugs to iron out and you'll have yourself a fully functional flash site.

Best regards, snapple :)