I know it isn't very good, how can I improve it?

[baz2450]

Hi, newbie post here!

Can you please take a look at my site and let me know what is wrong with it?

http://tinyurl.com/5jaql

Thank you,

Baz. :)

[ohno6345]

Hi,

I just looked over your site, and I have a few suggestions on things that could use improvement. I'm sorry I don't have the answers on how to make it better, but more what I noticed wrong. The site is nice, but it feels like something is missing. Here's what I noticed from using the site for the 1st time.

1) I didn't mind the music on the first page, as a music related website should include it, but the simple loop played too much as I kept going back to the pages. If it only played once that would better, or if it was more musical. Music slows websites down, and not everyone has sound, but if you're selling music lessons it would seem you would like music on the site.

2) On the screenshots page, I would have liked to be able to do the excercises. They say click, and its easy to forget you're just looking at a screenshot. Some of the pages do click and it takes you to another page. I'ld remove those or make them all click through with a navigation system.

3) Changing the background color to the webpage (HTML) might make your flash info stand out more.

4) On your FAQ page, I'm not sure if can be done in flash, but I'm so used to using the middle button on my mouse or the keyboard to scroll, that clicking on the scroll bar felt like extra work.

5) Make your contact me address clickable for email, and or highlightable so someone can copy and paste your email address.

Hope my suggestions help. I'm sure you know better than I do, but its good to get multiple people testing the site and reviews.

Good luck,

Neil

[baz2450]

Thanks Neil,

Some good points there, I will study them and attempt to improve the site!

:)

Baz.