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leky
11-01-2001, 03:27 PM
Hi..Guys

I'm doing a Flash assignment about Japanese comic online. Please check it out and give me a big feedback and comments for my next ass (Evaluation)

PS. I know they are some bugs, so please help me fix it

Cheers

http://homepages.ihug.com.au/~songpan/

Raster
11-02-2001, 03:12 AM
pretty kool, one thing for sure. On your links page, add a background to your links, otherwise you have to be directly on part of the letters, and that sux. I mean if you put you mouse in the center of an O it even does not connect.

Just a little thing.

Late Raster

vilehelm
11-02-2001, 03:49 AM
i would also get somebody to check your copy... there are a few instances of words that are not quite translated correctlly i.e. you have "varies" where i think you meant to say "various". Little stuff like that.

Works fine, maybe a little too much like every other Anime. The genre seems to be really hitting a rut.

The opening builds a little slow. Not that it downloads slow. It's just this part builds then that part builds then that part builds. Try mixing things up and getting that thing to slap together faster.

leky
11-02-2001, 01:35 PM
Thanks,,,Raster

I'm thinking of changing this section as soon as I can, I'll let you know when something new come up and please give me some comment again

Thank you very much

Cheers

Leky

leky
11-02-2001, 01:40 PM
Thanks again,,,,,vilehelm

Yes,,,,lots of typo in there, may be because of my limited English.
I'll ask someone to check though the site.

about the slow issue, I really stuck with that even preloading!
Do you have any tutorial links that teach me step by step to solve that problems?

Thank you very much

Leky

vilehelm
11-02-2001, 03:44 PM
It's not a technical issue really. It's just a lot of steps that you have to go through for the interface to build itself. It's not that critical.