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JonM
05-10-2005, 12:48 AM
http://www.jonmdesign.net

its a little rough around the edges, but im working on it

I would really like your ideas and tips, its the only way I can get better, so please feel free to post them!

actionscript.org helped me out a lot with this, since I am kinda new to flash

xdeliriumx
05-13-2005, 02:01 PM
New to Flash, huh? It's a great site... I'm new to Flash myself, but I must be really, really, REALLY new if you're new.

I like the navigation to the different projects... the "myst-like" flipping of pages is sweet, does the text that tells you to flip the pages disappear after a few seconds, though? I was a little confused at first by what to do (I also have had no coffee yet this morning). Also, not a big fan of opening multiple windows to see examples of stuff, I'm a little lazy, but I think most people appreciate everything to be compacted on to one page.

Again, awesome site (and content!).

Echo419
05-15-2005, 04:42 PM
Brilliant use of masking in the beginning, but that box that slides in looks tacky compared to the motion of the first animation... Have the outline traced in slowly using masking, then the interior faded in... Know what im saiyng? Also make the buttons have roll overs... maybe make the text go white? VERY good art work

-echo
www.attackingecho.com

::edit:: disregard my comment about the roll overs, i didnt notice they faded to a lighter red... brilliant, goes a little bit too slow I think, because you actually have to look for it to see it... (just my opinion) they do look pretty sweet now tho.