I need advice for my first animation

[cxn926]

there is many glitches and im not done yet but i just want the first part helped
http://img125.echo.cx/my.php?image=face3kk.swf

[Ruben]

Erm, there's alot that you should improve on the thing I recogn:

- Use some proper tweening (or even frame-by-frame animation) for the kicking
- Have another look at the lip-syncing (sometimes the mouths are still moving for a little while after the talking's stopped), and the mouths aren't really moving in a talking manner (http://www.actionscript.org/forums/showthread.php3?p=234092). I've read something about a speech-plugin (http://www.actionscript.org/forums/showthread.php3?t=42813) thingie, you might wanna look into it.
- If you would want to have the characters walking in some stage then you should follow the webmonkey-tutorial on creating a walk cycle (http://webmonkey.wired.com/webmonkey/02/05/index4a.html?tw=multimedia).
- Also, as soon as you want to have more smooth animations then keep your framerate in mind...
- Furthermore, the arms are looking a bit odd with the elbows up in the air...

:rolleyes: - Ruben


PS. Why on earth are the guys doing the devilhorns?

[cxn926]

PS. Why on earth are the guys doing the devilhorns?
only hair i can draw well

[Ruben]

only hair i can draw wellWell then the solution's simple, right? Just give them kids alot of hair on their arms

:D - Ruben