Portfolio site check

[JackCrack99]

Hello. I just finished my website (http://jaccra.farvista.net/) , and would like some constructive criticism on it. I just started learning flash, so there are no advanced features on the page... yet. For now I just needed a decent showcase for my hand-drawn and digital art. So let me know what you think. Thanks

[Dylan Marvin]

I like it. My first reaction was going to criticize the size of certain things, and this and that, but you what? It's different and it works well. I like your sketches as well. Nice site.

(One other thing, a recommendation: Never give a disclaimer like "...first ever attempt at building a Flash webpage" or anything like that on your site. This your portfolio/resume. No need to be humble!)

[SuperApe]

Nice site.
Creative and fun.
Small suggestion: increase the width of the text box for your loading percentage number, the % sign runs off the edge of the box and is cut off.
Good work.

[JackCrack99]

Thanks for the tips and compiments guys. I might edit that thing about the page being my 1st attempt at flash, but I think it helps explain why it's in the condition its in. If/when I revise it, I might take that line out.

Does anyone else see a problem with the loading graphics? I have checked it on firefox and explorer in different rezolutions, but I don't see any part of it being cut off, so I don't know how I would fix it. On my conneciton the thing goes away soo fast I don't really have time to see it anyway.

[Dylan Marvin]

Can't see the loader either, but have you tried "show streaming" (in the top menu) when you test your swf's through Flash itself? It can simulate dial-up, thereby giving you time to see what's going on.