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hamidariannejad
01-12-2002, 06:07 PM
hi dear friends,
please tell me how this site looks like.your critics and opinions will help me greatly.
thanks in advance
http://sepidar.8m.net

poab
01-13-2002, 02:23 AM
Hi,

I can't speak (arabic?) So I'm not sure what all of the text was. But at a guess..... Home rental/sale?

I only have one criticism: I don't think your (assuming it was you) illustration skills are as developed, as you design skills. The colour's were spot on, and everything felt clean and professional. Because of this, the illustrations (which a lot of people would have got away with) weren't in keeping. (I'm talking about the houses in the background of 'Features and Building Details)

I don't think you should drop them, just make them a little more abstract like the map of the world you're using, or the street map.

Apart from that great, (and fast)

cheers.

hamidariannejad
01-24-2002, 11:10 PM
Thanks a lot,
You're quite right.My illustration skills are not well developed yet.That's the weak point that i feel very often and because of that i've recently began self learning of freehand 10.i hope next time it would be more satisfying.
btw i'm sorry about the mostly "persian" text of this site.