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StormINK
12-14-2005, 03:38 AM
Just finished my site that I have been asking questions about actionscript and flash for.


It's an online art portfolio.

http://www.StormInk.net



Check it out! Tell me if you see anything wrong with it. (The loading bars on some of the pages stop at 50%... I know... not going to fix that for a week because I have vacation to Switzerland! (Skiing))


Hope you guys like it and the work inside it!

absholute
12-14-2005, 05:27 AM
hi StormINK,
Your web is OK for an Online Portfolio. But theres some suggestion that you might think of.

1. Coding for preloader showing the 100% is better
if (p<100) {
preloader_mc.gotoAndStop(p);
} else {
preloader_mc.gotoAndPlay(100);
this.onEnterFrame = null;
}
p = percentage

This is just an example

2. Your site would be better using Intro and Outro when any button clicked
3. And its better if you try something different for transition other than fade in/out.


Overall, Its structured already. Those suggestions that I mentioned, who knows you would like to improve it. Thats my point of view anyway. Decision is always in your hand. Well done!

Cheers!
Robert

Headshotz
12-14-2005, 10:53 AM
The actual site looks pretty good BUT, you need a background instead of plain white and a border or at least a dropshadow to define it from the background. ;), fix that up :D