what do you all think?

[dipsb_13]

hey guys

what do u all think of:


link (http://www.janis.designreel.com)

please give me your views

Cheers

Dips

[Headshotz]

The design goes quite well, to make it better you could have some types of transitions or animation and even sound.

[dipsb_13]

added some transitions how about now?


http://www.janis.designreel.com (http://www.janis.designreel.com)

Dips

[muppet]

kind of difficult to see the site for the content ... and that's a good thing. HeHeHe!!

Like the site (and content), the transitions are really good.

One thing I would change ... once it gets to 100% loaded just have it go to the site, it doesn't need the next 'enter' click.

PS. how'd you get that site, friend?

[dipsb_13]

Cheers for the feedback

ahhhhhhhhhhhh now that would be telling

like most designers I keep how I get my clients a big secret! hahaha

Na I'm just good at getting clients through the door I am able to sell well as I have a sales orientated background so therefore I just sell myself to people

This client didn't approach me I approached them

Its the gentle art of persuasion which always wins

ahhhhh i see your company is based in Bournemouth - I just graduated from Southampton woohoo!

Dips

[Flash Gordon]

First impressions: (and they are always the most important)

Need to have more nudity!
The pics tweens are jerky. Are you using tween class or onEnterFrame?
Simple design but effective.
Nice job on the cut-out of the model. Very clean! How did you get it so cleanly cut out???
How about adding a suttle background image in the html.

[dipsb_13]

cheers Flash

When you say jerky do you mean the actual images that slide accross?

the code for the slide is:

----------------------------------------

onClipEvent (load) {
_x = 0;
_y = 0;
spd = 8;
}
onClipEvent (enterFrame) {
_x += (endX-_x)/spd;
_y += (endY-_y)/spd;

_root.fashion001.onRelease = function() {
endX = 0;
endY = 0;
}

----------------------------------------------------

Is this jerky for everyone?

Thanks for the comment about the cut out image - really chuffed about that as I can't use photoshop to save my life - (learning from tutorials - its the only way) - used the extract function n then the eraser tool - nothing fancy and bingo it turned out cool

Dips

[dipsb_13]

actually can people check to see if its jerky for them too...anyone know how to stop it being jerky if it is?

Dips

[Flash Gordon]

use the "undocument tween class" in the tutorials. It is just the endings of the tween get very jerky....not smooth at all.

[Headshotz]

Need to have more nudity!



Hehehehehehehehe

[dipsb_13]

hey again Flash

I've been looking into "undocument tween class" and found it says everywhere its for Flash MX 2004

don't suppose you know if this will work in plain old MX do you?

I'm going to try it out anyway?

Did anybody else find it being jerky?

Dips

[Flash Gordon]

for me is just gets jerky when it slow down too much, you could make the ease a little less. I'm not sure about the tween class for MX, I think you may be out of luck...Did anybody else find it being jerky?

[Headshotz]

When you rollOver the buttons in safari it rapidly changes between the "hand" and the mouse, flickering :confused:

[dipsb_13]

hey guys

I know it may be a stupid Q but is there an equilivant version of Safari for PC which will enable me to see the problem headshotz is experiencing?

Also whats the best way of testing compatibility of my sites on a mac when I dont actually have a mac and do not have access to one?

All my designs are done on PC

I know I need to get a mac but I'm broke at the moment

Any idea's why headshots is ezperiencing the things he is?

Dips

[Headshotz]

hey guys

I know it may be a stupid Q but is there an equilivant version of Safari for PC which will enable me to see the problem headshotz is experiencing?

Also whats the best way of testing compatibility of my sites on a mac when I dont actually have a mac and do not have access to one?

All my designs are done on PC

I know I need to get a mac but I'm broke at the moment

Any idea's why headshots is ezperiencing the things he is?

Dips

Hi,

No sorry, the only thing close is a skin for firefox, that wouldnt help.

Post here, site check is my most visited forum.

Thats alright, most people do

Dont need to, but they are cool.

No, I will take a look through it and see if I can find a bug

:D - Headshotz

[Headshotz]

Hmmmm, this must be a safari bug not anything with the flash
content itself, it only happens on every 2nd or 3rd visit to the site,
I will still try and find whats wrong though.

[dipsb_13]

cheers headshotz

really appreciate it!

if only I could afford to buy a mac

:o(

Dips

[Headshotz]

Safari has problems with flash content sometimes, theres not much you can do about it.

[Flash Gordon]

@dipsb_13: just of out coursity, how did you make that awesome background behind the chick?

[dipsb_13]

WOOHOOOO FLASH LIKES THE BGROUND!!!

proper chuffed now!- Did it by following a tutorial for a metal effect

Damn starting to worry can't remember where I saw the tutorial however its something like

photoshop -> set foregroud and bground different colours add "difference clouds" (filter) -> add noise -> add motion blur -> and then mess around with the lighting

damn if only i had writted down the url of the tutorial nooooooo
:confused:

Dips

[dipsb_13]

Thanks headshotz!

atleast now I know i'll bare that in mind from now on

Dips

[Flash Gordon]

Thanks for the tip. I'll play around with that.

It looks very professional.

WOOHOOOO FLASH LIKES THE BGROUND!!!

proper chuffed now!- Did it by following a tutorial for a metal effect

Damn starting to worry can't remember where I saw the tutorial however its something like

photoshop -> set foregroud and bground different colours add "difference clouds" (filter) -> add noise -> add motion blur -> and then mess around with the lighting

damn if only i had writted down the url of the tutorial nooooooo
:confused:

Dips

[dipsb_13]

no worries Flash

Dips

[Headshotz]

Thats cool, I like the background too, looks great.

[Flash Gordon]

Momma always said, "Eat your vegitables".

:p

[Headshotz]

Now we know what happens to are vegetables, they are used to cover naked women before being jammed into plastic bags and exported to your supermarket.

Hmmmm thats logical.