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Paul Ferrie
01-02-2006, 11:42 AM
Hi guys. Well 2nd day of the new year, it's time to get started again.:eek:

I have been tinkering about with this site (http://www.thelettingdoctor.com/main.html) spent a couple of days on it but i can't quite get the feel of it to say that it is finished. I feel it is a bit ruff and could do with soffing up a bit.

http://www.thelettingdoctor.com/main.html

Any comments.

thanks

Paul

Headshotz
01-03-2006, 09:21 AM
I think it does need impovements on the graphic design side. Maybe on text and on transitions aswell.

Paul Ferrie
01-03-2006, 09:23 AM
Can you elaborate more please...

Headshotz
01-03-2006, 09:35 AM
First, The shadow looks good and the blue lines with the squares down the side should definately stay.

I think the actual content looks a bit ordinary though, it should have some graphics in there to make it look more interesting, such as next to or mixing with "the letting doctor" text. Also the page transitions are just an instantanious change, you should have some type of transitions, such as (at least) a fade, a blur or a more complex animation. The tween classes are perfect for that stuff :D.

-:) Headshotz

Paul Ferrie
01-03-2006, 09:38 AM
Thanks for the feedback. Will have a look into the tweens class. Herd that mentioned a few times but never had a look yet.

Thanks again

Headshotz
01-05-2006, 03:59 AM
It is really good, look at this tutorial here:

http://www.actionscript.org/tutorials/advanced/Tween-Easing_Classes_Documented/index.shtml

^They dont seem that smooth, but if you use them they turn out great :D