Looking for some brutal feedback!

[tc0]

http://www.actionscript.org/forums/s...587#post575587

I just posted the thread above because my site can't currently be crawled by search engines with my swfobject, but in addition to that problem, I would really appreciate any and all feedback and suggestions you guys could give me for my new flash site (below). I'm not a web designer just a photographer but I thought up the layout and whatnot. Anyways, it's in beta-testing / troubleshooting mode and attached to my designer's domain until I find hosting. Thanks in advance for your suggestions, and don't be gentle
http://www.lonelyart.com/tom3/

[jldrue]

very elegant. loads quickly. i like the image viewer. clever idea with the map. gorgeous photos might i add!
some constructive feedback:

- in your flash intro where the outline of the country is traced - i would speed this up immensely - it's just too slow.
- i'm not crazy about the cursive script font....to "flowery" and hard to read.
- i would speed up the fade ins, too slow.

other than that great work.

[tc0]

thanks alot!!! so more faster, huh? anyone else? now if someone would just help me with the bigger problem of why the swfobject isn't being crawled...

[3pepe3]

Well I really don't like the typography... The context (subject) is very rich but it seems that the analysis was very poor and quickly.
I would say that the only good thing was the Chinese map