Yo,
I've just mustered an alpha version of my first real Flash game. It has a ways to go, but I need feedback to get there. If anyone is interested in checking it out: Astro v0.1. I appreciate any comments.
1. buttons must be visible(not DARK green on black)
2. buttons stay in the same exact place,your are all over the place
3. add instructions, in the game:
"choose a charecter,then press NEXT"
(nice big RED button saying next)
charecter are cool but I, couldn't figure out how to press Roll and open a door....