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Old 02-15-2001, 08:56 PM   #1
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Would like to "order" a site check for page at http://www.belliger.com/supreme - only intro works for now.
It is a newbie page ( 3 months exp ) so dont be TOO hard on me. Would like information bout what you like, what you dont like , what should be removed and what should be added so ..

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Old 02-15-2001, 10:39 PM   #2
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all i got was a black screen

ie5 - cable modem
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Old 02-16-2001, 01:06 AM   #3
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Nice music, nice idealogical text.
There's abit that says "Sometimes bit..." I'd make that "Sometimes a bit...".

Might also ad some more activity in the background as it gets a little tedious. Either that or shorten the intro (reduce the number of scenes with text).

Good use of sound. Nice site for a beginner. Load times was good.

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Old 02-16-2001, 07:58 AM   #4
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The backrounds is a problem that is currently been fixed.
One more question ( it is about making the intro shorter ) is that is the time enough / too much to be able to READ the text. Cose it's all written by me and actually has a bit point in them and I would like people , who have time to watch the demo to read the text. Creates a bit different atmosphere than the other COMMON pages .. BUT , if you say that the time is enough to read it then I would be MORE than glad to make the intro shorter .

Maby someone can help on that post , who sayed that he got a blank screen ... what could be the problem ???
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I found that that the time was just about right. Perhaps slightly too long if anything (and I'm not a fast reader).

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Old 02-16-2001, 05:49 PM   #6
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zulu - i tried again today to view your site - when i click on the url you gave it brings me to a new browser window with just a black screen - i wish i had an answer to this problem - any thoughts?

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Talking blank screen

Maby you dont have flash player properly installed ( I have a javascript on that should redirect you when you dont have flash player but maby it is not working right?!?! )

Visit Macromedia web page and try to install/reinstall flash player!

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i have the f5 player..sorry..i just viewed a flash site
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