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Old 11-07-2004, 05:16 PM   #1
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Hello peeps =)

I have just finished my web site and would like some constructive critisism.

If you have any suggestions on what to improve, I would also like to know how to improve it (with examples)


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Old 11-08-2004, 05:33 AM   #2
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How r u ? The things which i like about your site are as follows:

1. It loads swiftly which is a very good thing ,people won't have to wait for a long time in order to view your site.

2. It has a professional look.

3. The BG music on your site is according to the ambience.

4. pics. on your site r beautiful.

1.Things which i'm not sure about are pics. on your site. They r not displayed in a consistent manner.Sometimes they change when u press a hyperlink sometimes they don't (maybe there's something wrong with my browser,i donno).
2.music controls buttons. are located way down, they r too dark with no kind of indication what they r for. For someone who is used to viewing flash sites may know what they r about but ppl. who aren't will have a prob.

Overall it's a good site.

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Old 11-09-2004, 08:16 PM   #3
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how can you have a list of composers and not have John Williams on it.
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Old 11-10-2004, 05:15 AM   #4
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Or james horner...my personal favorite...
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Old 11-10-2004, 03:35 PM   #5
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i agree with lackluster on the display of the work. Maybe you should have them full res within your site w/a link to the deviations site. Also I saw no music control or heard any music(your probably retooling it or something.)

otherwise site is slick as well as the images.
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Old 11-11-2004, 12:46 PM   #6
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Sorry for the late reply, but thanks for your feedback guys!


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