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Old 11-24-2005, 05:57 AM   #1
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This is one of my latest sites, almost done with content tweaks.

http://www.esodl.com

Reviews of all shapes and directions welcomed.

There are a few somewhat weak areas I hope to address in the near term, but overall -- I hope you think it communicates the company's philosophy of collaboration.

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Old 11-26-2005, 07:12 AM   #2
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I like your photo choices, and the color scheme that you use in the site. The site has a comfortable feel.

The black border that surrounds your content on the pages seems out of place. It would look better if that black was on the top and bottom only. Try removing it from the left and right sides. It just seems overbearing I think, but that could just be me.

Maybe add a subtle background pattern? Do you really need the word "menu"?

Good job overall.
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I like your photo choices, and the color scheme that you use in the site. The site has a comfortable feel.

The black border that surrounds your content on the pages seems out of place. It would look better if that black was on the top and bottom only. Try removing it from the left and right sides. It just seems overbearing I think, but that could just be me.

Maybe add a subtle background pattern? Do you really need the word "menu"?

Good job overall.
Ditto

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